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this is what i want from u

i want you to love me
i want you to need me
i want you to never let me go
i want you to let ur feelings show
i want you to tell me you love me
i want you to need me jus like i need you
i want you to call me ur baby
i want to be ur first lady

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Written May 31st, 2006

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  • ladyhurricane
    January 22, 2008

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    Wow...

    LaughingThis was great, Its funny how u can say so much in so little words...

    this was well put,  Its sounds like something I want and need!!!


  • aeolia
    July 24, 2007
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    Not really a poem, is it? More like bad, repetitious teenaged rantings sans proper grammar.