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Mother

A Mother Is:::

Loving hands quickly reach
Each time she hears a cry
Lifting up to comfort
And kiss the tears all dry
Weary eyes refusing sleep
Stay the whole night through
Her child is sick and hurting
Her tender care is due
The many tasks all done in love
To make it through each day
Seem to go unnoticed
Till she is gone away
A Mother is that someone
With a mission from above
Imparting to her children
The image of God's love!

Author notes

Dedicated to my MoM
Written May 31st, 2006

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  • PoetsAngel
    August 18, 2006
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    This is just lovely, It makes me want to call my Mum and tell her how much she means to me, I hope one day when my kids are grown the will appreciate me like you do your Mother.....Tear!


  • PoeticPashun
    August 17, 2006
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    Very Nicely Done. You can feel the Love in each line that you have for your Mother. Wonderful Job!


  • Abby100 Mann
    August 11, 2006
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    A LOVELY WRITE!!!

    A beautiful piece of free verse poem that intimates the readers with the love and awesome devotion of mother to
    her children.I admire the way you have been able to put all these thoughts together.
    Thank you so much for taking the time to share with us all on this poets forum.

  • mina nagi
    August 9, 2006
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    What a lovely tribute to your mum... she must be pleased with this... as you said we don't realise how much she maens to us till she's gone away... I can relate to this one... nothing can replace mum's unconditional love and dedication... beautifully worded my friend... thanx for taking time to comment on my poem...

    mina


  • Cherokee
    June 7, 2006
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    You have a very lucky mom. I think this is so sweet and beautiful. You must be a very appreciative and caring person. I hope you showed this to your mom.


  • honey bear
    June 4, 2006
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    very good

    a beautifull wrote for a much loved mother my friedn i hope she loves it, keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this with us


  • BettyB
    June 3, 2006
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    A beautiful poem, I am sure Mother is very pleased by this. Great work!


  • A Ganesh
    June 3, 2006
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    SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOO SSSSSSSSSSSWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTT! Really superb when you write a poem for your mother!

    Warm regards,

    GAnesh

  • intense rush
    June 2, 2006
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    Beautiful tribute to your mother. I am sure this shall please her very much. Did you give it to her on mother's day?


  • May 31, 2006
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    This is beautiful. It's wonderful that you know you should appreciate your mother so much.


  • Celticmoon
    May 31, 2006
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    You have penned the image of a true mother into a picture perfect masterpiece. The beauty you have set forth within your words is amazing. Sadly we often take our mothers for granted and never see this until they are gone. It is only then we tend to realize all that they have done for us in so very many ways. It is nice to see someone taking the time to show their mother how much they appreciate all she has done for them. Bravo!

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