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Let

Let

Let not the world see your tears
long after you cried
push the failures aside
let none say that, you never tried!

Let the world find your footprints
long after you died
and remember forever that,
you are the one, who made it bright!

Let the world feel your presence,
let a warm glow reside,
in the hearts, a little deep inside
lets live this life, and live it with pride!

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Written May 31st, 2006

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  • Abby100 Mann
    August 11, 2006
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    NICE AND INSPIRING!!!

    This is a beautiful piece of admonition to the reader on the need to let the past be past;by living in the joy of the present with the sole aim of living a footprint in the sand of times.


  • honey bear
    June 4, 2006
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    very good

    a wonderfull write my freind thank you and keep up the good work this is a very special write


  • Inside and out
    June 1, 2006
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    This is lovely. It is positive and uplifting and well written. This poem is a pleasure to read and will lift many spirits. Nicely done.

  • purefriendship
    June 1, 2006
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    Thanks to Celticmoon & SilentbutScreaming for the encouragements.

    with best regards
    subbu


  • Celticmoon
    May 31, 2006
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    This piece is so beautifully diplicted that one cannot help be feel lighter and uplifted in a very loving and tender way. Your words speak volumes and they portray a wonderful image in the mind. You have a way and bring forth feelings of true heartfelt sweet love for all around you. A true gift if I do say so myself. Bravo!

  • SilentbutScreaming
    May 31, 2006
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    uplifting!!!!

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