I love : by southern kisses at All poetry

I love:
~his smile
~his laugh
~the look he gives you if he is dying for a kiss
~his dark and sexy eyes
~his jokes even the mean ones
~muscles(such a turn on!!

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~the way he stops whatever he is doing and comes just for me.no matter what it is
~where i mean more to him then his friends
~being around him every second!!
- but most importantly i love him. he is my world and my life.
I love you baby!!

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Written May 31st, 2006

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VampiressLunaFaerie
February 6, 2007
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wow this can work for 2 people...and the one you wrote this one for I think that I know but anyways I really like this one...Ari is right it is sad and depressingish...awww fate can be so kind sometime and then she turns around and becomes a bitch...damn you fate damne you...lol
L. J. Arien
June 29, 2006
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aw how sweet! i love it. depressing for the divorced girl, but that's okay... now i have to make a long ass comment so i can post up some more damn poetry so, please forgive the random babbling. my hair is dyed burgundy 45, it's quite cool, and i have new pics on myspace, me and jacob are talking i love him so much, and he still isn't over me but isn't doing anything about it, so i'm like wth, i wore my hair in braids yesterday, and it was so cute, but no one said anything after complaing about it being the same for five years, and i finally do something, and no one says anythign, except for about the color, i was like what the crap, yo? i hope this is damn well long enought, cuz i'm going to run out of things to say, haha you know that's not possible, haha.
morningstar1948
June 4, 2006
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Bring Back Memories.
Being in Love mean alot of things. Like Falling for the guy because he treat you like a queen. Hummmmmm~~~~ Now that what mine does. Being in love is being able to sit down and have a conversation with ouy words. Body talk with your eyes also. love is what make the world go around. Love is being able to tell him you love hin in one look.
You Ddid a beautiful job on this one. Oh By the way!~ thank you for the review for me. Remember Love is not having to say it outloud.
Your freind
Morningstar 1948
e102689
June 1, 2006
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such about eric!! hope you have a great summer with him!!
Shakari
May 31, 2006
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This piece was so sweet! I love how you took a unique and creative approach by listing off some of his good qualities. I bet there are many more that you could name, for some people just seem to going and going on about their boyfriends...like the energizer bunny. Well, I noticed a few glitches in this piece. In line 9, 'then' should probably be 'than'. In some of the lines, you forgot to capitalize the "i's" and letters after the periods, but some people think that doing that ruins the poetry...so I am unsure there. Otherwise, this piece was fantastic, not cliched, and shows how much you love your boyfriend. Keep up the great work!
SupaLovePoet
May 31, 2006
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I can only wish a girl would think of me in this way, This was a really cool writing. It shows everything you love about the guy. Very cool write. peace.
Damselflydreams
May 31, 2006
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very romantic without being sappy, of course I love all love poems lol
southern kisses
May 31, 2006
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Well you do that. I aint finished though cuz he means more i just cant think of everything now.
-the other missy-
Edited on May 31, 10:12 because ''.
MrsDobbins
May 31, 2006
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lmao I should write something like this for J.P.! It's so sweet!!!!
Much love
missy