It stings the pretty waves
collided against the water
the moon upon the ocean
Is swept around in motion
Give me hope
sweep me love
never forget
If we stay here we're not together
for my heart
is singing praise
It stings the pretty waves
collided against the water
the moon upon the ocean
Is swept around in motion
Dark sounds
ringing against my heart
for the love we need
is rare, yet free
tell me
that you need me
your eyes that never lie
It stings the pretty waves
collided against the water
the moon upon the ocean
Is swept around in motion
But without ever knowing
The reason for its flowing
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Opiton #1
Yeahh Baby!!
Written May 31st, 2006
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thanks for re entering ! i am sry for the trouble i caused u !
About the poem it is simply amazing and i love the way u have rewritten the song of enya ! there is meaning deeper than i can think hidden beneath the layers of the poem! the poem is soothing and relaxing like the original track and makes me think of the song ! i love ths ong a lot and i was very impressed by the lyrics so i added it to my contest ! a fine job by u ! i like the repition of the line the moon upon the ocean is swept away in motion! wat a beautiful effect it has !
thanks for entering and keep it up !
preets
best of luck to ya !
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Very beautiful imagery in this poem. I love the visuals this gave me! Thanks for sharing and goodluck in the contest.
Charishma
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