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IŽm watching the rain fall down
On the other side of ny window
I think I might just jump
And drown in the water
Instead of drowining in my own sorrow

Cause I just canŽt stand
The way the walls seem to scream for you
ItŽs so fustrating
So agrivating
I just donŽt know what to do

I wanna pick up the phone
And dial the number I know so well
Talk to you hours and hours at a time
But thatŽs not gong to happen
As far as I can tell

So IŽll get some paper
And put a pen in my hand
IŽll write out everything
Trying to make sense of it
Trying to understand

How things can be so good
Only to become so bad
How at one moment everything was perfect
Now IŽm just a mess
Missing everything I once had

IŽll finish my poem
Then throw it out into the air
Maybe then IŽll jump after it
And freefall to the ground
And pray that youŽll be there

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I miss you
Written May 31st, 2006

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  • Captain Obvious
    July 30, 2006
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    i really like this poem.
    it's emotional and inspiring and i just really like it.
    ~ captain obvious


  • Lucky429
    June 18, 2006
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    i love this poem. it seems familiar to me.

  • Your-Paradox
    June 8, 2006
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    I adore the last line its so inspiring!
    "IŽll finish my poem
    Then throw it out into the air
    Maybe then IŽll jump after it
    And freefall to the ground
    And pray that youŽll be there"
    Its so beautiful, and i can really imagine it in an art-noir film
    Well done!


  • mindless wolf
    June 5, 2006
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    thats awesome.. i really like this...