If words could define my love for you
They might sound a little something like this
There is no mountain I would not climb
Nor any ocean I would not dive
No mile I would not walk
Or car I would not drive
In order to share this love I have for you
If words could define my love for you
I would no longer be able to take you out
Make you feel so special that there was no doubt
That this love I feel is real
No longer could I call you the queen of my heart
Or Make you smile out of joy of the small things
If words Could define
If words could define my love for you
I could not write this poem to show you how I feel
And I would not see you smile as you read it
Or kiss your smiling lips after you were to read
Pick you up and spin you around kissing you all the while
Tell you i love you and it still have that same shocking affect on you
But I have no worries because
Thats only if words could define
Author notes
I hope this is good
Written May 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- I want to Feel The Fiery Passion by EternalFyre.
450 points, ended February 20, 2007, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Romantic
This is very good. I like the honest style of this piece. It flows well, is full of heart and envelopes you in the emotions. Thats something alot of form poetry tends to lack, you work so hard at the form, you lose the heart of the poem. personally, I really enjoyed reading this. It make me smile like this
It is totally lovely. Bravo!
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If words could define my love for you
I could not write this poem to show you how I feel
And I would not see you smile as you read it
Or kiss your smiling lips after you were to read
Pick you up and spin you around kissing you all the while
Tell you i love you and it still have that same shocking affect on you
But I have no worries because
Will this is beautiful.. I guess I never took enough time to see how so sweet and really caring you are this is so wonderful
Pj's
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Hi, sweet write some might say a little cliche lol, but cliches have stood the test of time, it looks like you are really smitten, be happy my friend, all the best, hugs Di
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Awesome write! liked it a lot !
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Beautiful
Ink of the heart stuff but excellent.
But in the first stanza i would have put nor any ocean I would not swim. Diving is far too easy to prove your devotion! -
This is an amazing write!
Thanks for sharing it!
Allen0826 -
Like all above, I am an amazed reader. And all I can say is dear, that this is indeed TRUE love. Good luck!
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excellent
This was a VERY good poem Will, I liked it a lot. Good write, keep it up.
~*~Sasey~*~ -
YOU HOPE!?!
This was apsolutely amazing!
and that is why you're one of my favorite authors!
this was just, so,
idk,
it was amazing!!!!
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very nicely done, love for your partner is strong god bless keep up the good writes
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awwwww.....this is such an awesome poem!! Girlfriend?
lol
seriously this is a really nice poem and i think you did a terrific job!
keep up the great work
much luv,
abbydoodle333 -
Very good write. So romantic. **feels inner girly girl oozing out** >.> I'm sure who ever got this was very, very happy. Great job. ^_^
Cassie -
lots of hyperbole in your poem..but i guess thats the magic of your drive and your resolve into portraying some more divine than the lord himself...i would agree to a lot of your words and understand what you must have felt when you wrote it..the most important aspect of your poem however is your sincerity of feeling..
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yay
Aww wow, this is yet another great love poem of yours. It's nice to know there still is love in here. And awesome to see that one of my friends is featured
Have a nice day!
-Charli -
This is AWESOME!! I know how you exactly feel. That is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend.good job!!
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This is a great poem. It shows how much love is important.
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5 Stars *****
hey there William The Vic... thanks for making me read this poem.. this is uber romantic..
.. well sorry for the late comment... well the poem its fantastic...did you make your special person read this poem... well i am sure that person wud have loved it...
take cares nand have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up.. your humble little friend.. ... 
... ... - vic ( who else? )
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!awsome! write brother. It's beautifully cute.
Love Me victoria
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Wow that was unbelievebly sweet, I really loved it. It's great that you can find the right words to describe exactly how you feel about this person and It's a great feeling to be in love. I could really feel where you were comming from. Great work, keep it up
~Jacinta
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I feel so loved. Naw, I'm kiddin. Great words and an awesome visual on love. Great job William. I luvs ya....
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lovely
awwwwwwwwwwww how very sweet and romantic rebel!
ever so sweet! I especially like the way the last line summs up the poem! lovely!
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