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Pick Up......

so separated and far
ive never been so disconnected
from your voice
or from your smile.
the way a smirk plays on your lips
or your eyes sparkle in the dark
when mischevious thoughts drift accross
your mind and lay on your tongue to be spoken.
i miss your arms
the warmth they provide and the bold statement
they make when wrapped around me.
i miss your tears
and the gentle way they fall
stinging pain showing on your face
but you being the person you are
stifling it to the background.
beauty.
and motion in you is my essence
the connection here is one deeper than
love
friendship
and the stars that shine above it all.
i hate this distance
not figurative
but literal.
come back soon,
my love.

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i miss Kyle......that is all.
Written May 30th, 2006

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  • thisbleedsthru
    May 30, 2006
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    Awww, quite a sentimental poem you've conjured. Though lamenting over a fawaway lover is the subject matter, it's the loving descriptions that lighten the mood and carry this piece. Your talent shines once again. Keep up the great work! ~Summer

    P.S. I hope he comes back to you very very soon!!!