See-through skin stretches miles to become a person;
Harsh jagged bones take up more space than muscles;
And movement of what's between skin & bone is nonexistent.
The mouth-
It screams with teeth that want to chew,
A throat that wants to swallow,
A tongue that misses taste.
While the stomach gurgles in pain from all the fun it's missed.
She says hunger owns no promise.
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Written May 30th, 2006
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Wow
I am quite frankly stunned
A very raw and blunt portrayal of anorexia.. but it's still amazing. I like how short it is - you have a lot of talent to be able to get across what you want to say in so little words.
* ~ Lauz ~ *
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this is so sad. its short but it doesnt need to be long becuase you managed to put so much emoiton into this. i do ask though, for you to fix your authors comments (read the rules)
thanks for entering
best of luck
~Laura
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