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Despise Me

The care I received
The love I once knew
Has now shattered to a thousand pieces
As it lies
Breathlessly
Beneath my bare and bleeding feet

How can you not feel?!
The pain you’ve released on me
With every infliction
You’ve broken that glass
Before it’s even glued together

I am yours
I am your flesh and blood
I come from your body
I am part of your soul
Yet you tear me as though
I do not matter
As if I am pathetic…
A shame in this family!

And once you start building
That new wall of trust
It’s been flipped over by those ocean waves
The waves of hate and enmity
Kill me!
Kill me!
Do not tell me this hurts you
For it hurts me
To see my own
Despise me

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Written May 30th, 2006

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  • Dygurl
    November 19, 2006
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    Very strong emotoin here. I hope things have since gottane better.

  • Dygurl
    June 2, 2006
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    Stay strong hun. Everything gets better with time. i like this thought. very strong words. keep your chin up.


  • Indecisive Speckle
    June 2, 2006
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    this is great and it is full of emotion. well done.


  • -MrsWonka-
    May 31, 2006
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    this is very emotional. the reader can feel your pain. but i do ask, if you could please fix your authors comments (read the rules)
    i do like this though. thanks for entering

    best of luck
    ~Laura