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In My Head

I just don't get you
                Your voice is in my head
   Making me lash out
                  Wishing I was dead

           Trying to fight the urge
Throw the razor from the room
       Sweating, Rocking back and forth
  Spiraling towards my doom

I just don't get you
       Your voice is in my head
                            Making me lash out
       Wishing I was dead

                            The sweet, sweet smell
  My blood, my tears
             Makes me so dizzy
       From the pain, the fears

I just don't get you
       Your voice is in my head
  Making me lash out
             Wishing I was dead

      Why not just end it
                              Have it all just go away
        The calm of not existing
             Causes me to sway

I just don't get you
                                          Your voice is in my head
              Making me lash out
                          Wishing I was dead

      So I go and get the razor
                     Slash it hard across my wrists
         Watch the blood flow out
                Clench my hands into fists

                           I just don't get you
       Your voice is in my head
                 Making me lash out
                                Wishing I was dead

The calm takes over
The world goes black
My mind slowly empties
Its feeling that I lack

Author notes

Call me Emo and I'll call it a day.
Written May 30th, 2006

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  • Nikki22
    December 3, 2006
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    Very good poem....I like it a lot.

  • The Broken One
    October 27, 2006
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    Thank you so much! I love hearing things like that, I actually dated the person who made me feel this way... after he made me feel this way >.> That would be the Forget To Remember commenter xD


  • Bonnie1023
    October 27, 2006
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    WOW... I officially have fallen in love with your work. You put your emotions into every single word. Its so heart felt, and you know how to capture the audience. You don't just let ink run like some ppl here. Great write

  • Forget To Remember
    June 27, 2006
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    EMO EMO EMO EMO EMO EMO anyways i spose it was good jk i liked it i can relate to most of it so its nothing new but it was a good poem


  • Tigris
    June 13, 2006
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    this is the best suicidial poem ive ever read. its the perfect song for those suffering with indecision. love the fact your background is far from sad.

  • amellowtruthaddict
    June 7, 2006
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    Well. Self mutilation i do not agree with and cannot re late to. It flows very well tho and its has a consistant tempo.

  • The Broken One
    June 2, 2006
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    Wow.. I think that's one of the nicest comments I've ever gotten...


  • xXPriesTXx
    June 2, 2006
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    that has to be the most powerfull poem for expression of emotions i have ever read

  • The Broken One
    May 31, 2006
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    I wuv you Soulmatey


  • ShadowFox
    May 30, 2006
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    Try not to let him get you down.
    He's really not worth it at all.

  • The Broken One
    May 30, 2006
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    Thanks Britt... And maybe if fucking stupid people would let me be... I would be.


  • ShadowFox
    May 30, 2006
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    It's a good poem...
    But so sad and stuff...
    Be happy, Jaymeeee.

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