PANIC
/HeartRacing/
Blood.Pumping
Adrenaline
---Fight or Flight?---
FLIGHT!!
...Too Late
...Blank Walls
...Detachment
'Just look away'
But it's a car wreck
And mine is the only blood shed
Author notes
Written for my fear of needles -- option one.
Written May 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~ Phobia's and Fears ~ by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended August 17, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sorry for the long wait~ I'll promise to judge by tomorrow ~ I've been waiting on Dark to give me her two cents ~ She told me earlier~ but there were some additional poems submitted since then. I sent her a message... a few days ago~
If I don't hear from her by Friday I will close and judge then ~ Let me know if you have any problems waiting until then ....
Thanks
Mali -
Thats an interesting way of putting it~ The write has a beat to it... Nice job~ Thanks for entering the contest~ Remember there's another judge still has to view this~ Good luck to you
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Cooooooool. You can tell how much I like it by how many o's there are. It's very jumpy and jerky and I think it works very well. Good job.
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I like this form. I use it myself. If you want to really see an excellent example of this check out mary cat. she rocks this style. Thanks for shards.
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