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Silence

Silence.
Slowly creeping,
screeching loudly.
Darkness and screaming,
the voices shut out.
Whispers of pain,
and also death.
Wretched feelings,
of swapmy shores.
This is your reality.
No breaking out,
of this gross mess.
Scream all you want,
no one will hear you.
Shout as loud as you can,
your living here.
Close your eyes,
to your new world.
Your new life.
Silence.

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I know sort of weird but I liked it.
Written May 30th, 2006

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  • MissCassie
    May 30, 2006
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    tehe go Ginny. *dances* It's like 11:30 pm, I can't sleep cuz I slept all day cuz I hadn't slept in two days. But I'm eating foods because I absolutely starving because I've abrely eaten in two days. So I really shouldn't be eating becaus eI have this pool party on Friday but ANYWAYS. Great poem, I think it's weird too but the weirder the better.
    Cass