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My AP Daughter Shahrzad, is a poet such as I,
Love each other as family, as each day goes by.
She’s always there for me, if I’m gloomy or blue,
Giving words of wisdom and advice always true.
For we’re poets together and can fly to the stars,
A freedom without boundaries, doors or even bars.
Her heart is not gold but pure, warm living flesh,
Which she gives out unselfishly, happy and fresh.
She never asks favours or anything, from all of us,
Except our Love in return to her, is a real plus.
We all Love Her and hold her, Dearest in our heart,
Feelings wholesomely natural, right from the start.
Shahrzad my daughter I’m proud, to be your AP Dad,
You gIve more happiness, than I ever before had.
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For we’re poets together and can fly to the stars,
A freedom without boundaries, doors or even bars.
Written May 30th, 2006
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Yay, you wrote so many poem for Shahrzad. Now I’m feeling jealous and wish to have an AP dad like you! *Sniffs* Jealousy is bad I know specially to a great spirit. Your wonderful as Shahrzad told it. I’m enjoying your works, dear Poet. Hope your fly to sky and shining stars are full of your imaginations!
~Vernal Bloom~
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TheKeeshondFreak Thank you for commenting on my work and it is a wonderful feeling to have written somethings that appeal to you Great work I am humble for your comments and taking the time to show them. great work,
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One should only write of truth- and here from the poem and comments you did. Good. I liked this- it shows that no matter what you have great admiration for her and respect(just as a dad should have- and a true friend if I say so.) Great Peice! (As always the rythm here worked very well.)
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This is such a beautiful well crafted tribute for your AP daughter--I'm sure she is very proud of this work and honoured to have you as a AP dad. Excellent.
Shaz xx
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Sandy Thanks for the beautiful comments and applause, which have made my day too. Love you too bazbrudder
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WONDERFUL POEM
My dear sweet Bazza. This was so beautiful and says so much about your sweet AP daughter and my sweet AP niece Shahrzad. She is as sweet as you. Always has a smile for me. And she is an awesome writer. Thank you for sharing and for all the kindness you show me. God Bless you. Love you, Sandy. Hugs for my Big Brother. Always there for me. Sandy
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WelshDragon Thankyou for you lovely comment and applause Bob and though I may fight the cheats and liars I also give tribute to those who deserve it, and Shaz is no exception and never taken for granted, something that is easily done. Fair is fair.
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A BEAUTIFUL PIECE!!!
What a beautiful way to honor an AP daughter.I admire the flow and form of this dedication.The poem is well worded to synchronize with the theme.
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Lovely piece Bazza. Beautiful tribute. Well penned. And nice to see all the good comments above...
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What do you mean by "floating everyone's poems" ?? I don't understand or comprehend what it means ... but then that's not unusual ... lol
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Misticmoonlite. Thanks love for the nice comment and she deserves it though. I will say when someone does the wrong thing but I will also praise when necessary. The wonderful thng abot Shaz is that she only deserves praise ... she is a real tryer and such a beautiful personality that it deserves praise.
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your daughter deserves this and so much more, she helps me with floating everyones poems, for that I am soooo greatful.. thank you for sharing this..
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Puppydog Thanks for the comment and I am certain she likes it. Thanks mate, but she certainly deserves it.
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urehooked. Thanks a lot mate !! Glad you liked it Kenny. Yes she is a wonderful person .... one in many millions.. I have learnt a lot from her and now know the true meaning of humble.... Thanks for the applause too and I hope to be back soon but I have sold my house and am investigating buying a motor home so I can write AT the place I am writing about. Trying to wangle a trip To Scotland too ...See ya mate..
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Quite agree with you dear daddy.
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Glad you like it My sweet. You deserve praise and Love in return, for we don't see enough of it these days. If only there could be less greed and more love, it would make the world a much happier and contented place. We as poets have a responsibility of spreading this feeling.
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SO TRUE!
His words are so true my dear friend, His description is right on the mark. A most beautiful and sincere post.
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Excellent
A lovely piece of writing from you there Bazza and i'm sure your Ap Daughter will be very proud of you for writing such a lovely poem about her.Excellent my friend.Kenny -
I love this poem dearest daddy. You know you're so wonderful to write me a poem so soon. I really didn't expect it.
I'll add it to my home page for all to read it and know that I have a wonderful daddy and why I love him so much.
Thank you very much. This is soooooooooooooooooo wonderful.
Shahrzad
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free2seeme62 Thank you for your comment and it is nice that you enjoyed it too.
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Very cool.Well written.
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