I feel like I'm falling helpless and stuck
There's no ground below me and no way to wake up.
My hearts turning into something of its own
These feelings I never showed have shown.
All around me I hear they're haunting whispers telling me I'm not good enough..Ill never be
I want to break this enchanting spell and let myself free.
I can no long breathe I'm drowning in my fears
I can see myself clearly now catching my falling tears.
The person I once knew so well has disappeared
I think I'm becoming what I always feared.
A person with no feelings and no love to give
For all the life that she has with no reason to live.
I try to turn away from this horrible thought
My heart and mind confused and wounded like a battle being fought.
I shudder and tremble as the dream fades away
All the words they told me begin to rewind and play.
I am deep in sleep but tears begin to fall from my eyes
As my mind chases them away with its own little horrid lullaby's.
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I just wrote this and im not sure if everyone can understand it clearly from my point of view and it kinda sucks but I duno....tell me what you think please!
Written May 30th, 2006
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Catchy
eww, nice ryhme scheme, catchy. Not too dark but has deep feeling. I applaud this. Good job, keep writing. -
UR BEST YET
hey Tiffy yeah I cant definitly relate to this poem, this is an awsome one i think this may be my favorit one of all of urs...i fear the same things about myself that you said in that so yeah i understand, um we havnt talked as much lately and i realize that but i dont know i feel like u dont need me anymore and would be better off without me, everyone would i have allready pushed several of my friends away b/c i feel its whats best, you seee a lot more than the others can by just looking in my eyes, but that scares me most cuz i am afraid ur going to find the secret and lies that hide under the smiles and tears.....well i have to go now so love ya chick bye!
Your Bre Bre -
Sad
This is a sad poem.Tiffany you do have feelings and love to give, you just havent found the right person to give it to.Im sure you will soon though.And remember im here to help you when you need it.
I love you
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i really enjoyed this one, i dont know what to say about it...
its sad! if you ever need anything just IM me or somthing
luv ya always devils-love -
Very Good
Your poem is good, it's really sad. I can tell it's very emotional, sorry to hear that you feel like that... but anyway hopefully your friends can help cheer you up? After all that's what friends are for
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Wow,,,,
Wow Tiff this wss really heart felt and i wish i could help you more... i try to be there for you all the time but i just cant seem to find the time.... im sorry and ill try harder to be there for you more i love you.
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OMG this is so good!!!!!!!! im lost for words
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