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Jug Of Nature

Jug of nature,
Holding the keepers of nectar.
Shine in the sun.

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Written May 30th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • DancingRed
    June 3, 2006
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    How interesting! The delicate imagery is superb, I'm not too sure I get the real meaning - but it does let you imagine all kinds of things!
    DancingRed.

  • Frodofan
    June 2, 2006
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    I don't think I quite understand this piece. Maybe I can analyze it...

    Jug of nature... a bottle filled with people? Maybe... the world?

    Holding the keepers of nectar? The people... sweet people? People who bring sweetness to the world?

    Shine in the sun? People are at their best when they are good? In the light? In the sun???

    Interesting piece.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 30, 2006
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    A very lovely write, so expressive and beautiful in so few words. Thank you for this entry... x LB


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 30, 2006
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    Liked the message in these few words - lets one imagine all kinds of things. Well written.