I know you loved me
For a little while
In the midst of last summer
When life was at its best
Did I smell the roses
Oh too soon
And reap the harvest
To languid presence
When did your heart
Turn to stone
The injection of scepticism
Break the spell
Your infectious laughter
Act in mime
Now I wonder
As time goes on
My heart so full
Of the joy you gave
Tormented and torn
In oblivious rhythm
Will I live with your
memory only
To the grave
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Written May 30th, 2006
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You actually made me feel your emotinos in this poem..good job. Poems that can make others feel are truelly strong poems that many people enjoy reading. I think one of these days I will read all your poems! Or at least try to! -
Hi thank you for your comment on my poem,your poems are very toching to me and i found them very lovely and sweet nice poem keep up the great work!
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Yes emotions are very strange but they all are part of lifes mystery dont you think and yes we do tend to forget the bad times.
Thank you for your wise and wonderful comment Denise
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Thank you for your comment my friend, I always cherish life and accept what it gives,but I dont move on.. it is life that takes me on a journey,.. who knows what is round the corner and lifes surprises and mysteries.
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The unknowns always seem to linger, sometimes to long. I understood this poem, I try to hold on to the good memories and let the bad ones fall away. Spoken with a true poets voice, excellent use of words and ideas flow within.
Love and light
Denise -
excellent
beautiful piece!, you put a lot of heart thats the best way of doing something like this
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