Stand not bare, enciting my soul,
The touch of ecstacy, I lose control.
Ah, though I crave, I must not see,
Swirling away, your hair so free.
Oh Venus, your unadorned dance,
Seen with lust, falling into a trance.
Just a touch of thy skin, thy flesh,
Will make each night and morning fresh.
Oh Aphrodite, hide thy fair skin,
Lest I indulge in that terrible sin.
Urges, desires to extinguish the flame,
Baring thine beauty without shame.
Oh Kama, alluring me, disclosed,
Ah, each dimension stands exposed.
And yes I am coming, to feel thine,
Body, flesh, and organs- now mine.
Author notes
ECSTASY
First verse, second line
Written May 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- A Fantasy of Ecstasy by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 1, 2006, 1 entries
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Excellent!! This was just simply amazing. I loved the rhyme and rhythm. Beautiful writing. Each stanza builds perfectly for the next, with the final relinquishment.
Thank you for the entry and good luck
Storm
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