Peaceful
I can be for
Love abundantly flows
No matter the situation
And despite the valley of depression,
His love still shines down upon me
In valley there's no fear
And my heart is
Peaceful.
Author notes
Right now I am going through the valley of depression right now and as I looked at this picture, I saw that just like the sun, God never stops loving me. Even when I have given up hope and stopped looking for it, it is there continually.
Written May 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- Picture Competition - Rictameter VI by ShelleyA.
300 points, ended June 5, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you Timothy for the comment as well as applause. I really appreciate it.
~*Chelsea*~ -
The picture is beautiful, but your poem adds a wonderful aspect to the picture that I would have never seen. Amazing description and imagery here. Writing poetry is the best way to release your feelings. Don't forget that
--Tim -
Very nice write. Good flow. Nice imagery and metaphor. Lovely expression of feeling. Your faith shines through in this piece. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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great
hey whats up.nice poem.thease are really nice words to hear right now.ive kind of not been going to church and stuff.its not that ive lost faith or anything.ive just been haveing a really hard time.well anyways seeya -
Already did sis
thanks though for pointing it out to me
~*Chelsea*~ -
Hey Chelsea
Wow great Rictameter.........This flows so good and it makes perfect sense. The only thing is I don't know if the second line goes really well.Keep on writing.Love ya and 
's to ya
Kimberly
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