Angel I promise you you'll never be alone
Believe me my heart will be your home
Angel don't worry about sleeping in your bed
Come to me and I will hold your head
Baby don't cry, I'm here
Baby don't cry, I'm here
Angel forever you will be safe in my heart
I'll hold you so we'll never be apart
Baby don't cry, I love you
Baby just smile, I love you
Baby don't cry, I'm here with you
Baby just smile, I love you, I love you
Author notes
For my future children, written on 3rd March 2003.
In a list
- songs • next in list
- memories I wish to forget • next in list
- 11-20 • next in list
- rhyme • next in list
A contest entry
- Baby Poem Contest by SexyAngel0418.
300 points, ended October 12, 2006, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Perfect Lullaby by Poetess12.
400 points, ended November 18, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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A beautiful lullaby and it goes great with the tune. Thank you very much for your entry
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This is so beautiful and such a touching write! I really loved this. Thank you so much for entering this amazing poem into my contest and good luck in it hun!
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Hey Laura... This is such a beautiful wee lullaby!! You did a great job on this!! Thank you so much for entering and good luck!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
This is very beautiful in the sense that it is packed with vision and emotion. I think that the imagery here is brilliant... good work, and good luck in the contest...I know the judge is going to have a tough time with all of these great entries, such as this one!!
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This is truly beautiful. I could easily imagine this being said to a child or even sung. Wonderful job on this
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These are pretty lyrics, and its nice to call a baby an angel :]. Good luck in the contest.
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i felt that you meant every word. Lovely poem!
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Awww! How sweet.
Pleasurable read
and excellent write.
Good Luck. Brenda
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WOW this is a very well written poem.... and good placement of words... there are many words that I can say about this poem... but I can't even come up with one to discribe the meaning behind this poem... I can up with one word Love..... good job on this poem.... keep up the good work... and good luck in this contest...
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LOVE IT
this is wonderfully beautiful!
you have a way with words and repetition that is so remarkable it has left me speechless
Alyssa
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Awwww!!!! This is very sweet!!!!! This just makes me want a little sis of my own!!!! Great rite!!!!
Good luck in the contest!!!!
MaryAnn
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Very Sweet
I was thinkin' that this was gonna be another one of those lovey dovey sappy poems (which are just fine when I'm in the mood
), but then I realized that it was about children and parents. Made me go give my mummy and daddy two hugs and kisses on the cheeks.
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Awww.... You almost have me crying with this one, and I don't cry easily. heh...... My ex used to call me Baby Angel, and I still love him more than I can say, so it sounded like an interesting poem. It is very touching, though... Reminds me of how him and I used to be, but now I have no clue where he is or anything, although he promised me that he would keep in touch, even if we had broken up. I guess you can't trust anyone anymore, though. Anyways, I really like your style here. It's so smooth, and the words are sweet, filled with emotion.
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WOW!!!!!!!!! love this poem...makes me think of each and everyone of my kids.
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This was a very touching poem and is very beautifully written.
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adorable
aww..so sweet! All children need their parents to support them like that! Great write!
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