Tornado carrier
Hurricane cousin
Unannounced or predicted
Noiseless at first
Darkening clouds
Electrifying charges
Rain and hail
Strong winds
Temperature drops
Orchestra of drums
Rumbling and roaring
Moving quickly
Silence again.
Author notes
This was inspired by a really good or bad, depending on how you look at it,thunderstorm we had last night.
Written May 29th, 2006
What did you think
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cool
i like it, i like it, i like it, hehe what can i say,,,, i like it
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Thanks Immortal. Now I will slip away in silence.
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thanks eye and you are welcome too.
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thanks touch I will try to keep drumming up new stuff.
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thanks bitten, glad you enjoyed my poem.
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Thanks celticmoon.
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thank you soul, I like doing acrostics.
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thank you Kaialise.
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thank you, goddess and keep your eyes to the skies.
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This is really good. I liked the lines about the drums. Great Job! Keep it up!
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Beautiful and all the more powerful
and that ladies and gentlemen this is the performance of a thunderstom!
Ok I hearby crown you ....
Queen of the acrostic writes!
All bow to thee, recognize her pressence, as that of a furious storm.
Her coming may have been silent at first.....But many now know her and with great notice! Behold....Starshine!
Edited on May 29, 8:25 p.m. because ''. -
Muy Bueno
Nice job Star, ggod to see you writing again, have missed it. As usual you write a strong acrostic, haven't done one in awhile myself think I might give it a whirl tonight, who knows.
Thank you also for the kind words on my last posting, it is different but it seems to work, no?
Anyway TTYL my friend,
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Wow, i love thunderstorms. Good to see a poem based on them! You can definitly add to this in the future because i can see so much more potential from this. But very good description and short lines adding affect.
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Personally I love a good strong thunderstorm and you have done well in penning the exact aspects of such a strom. They are a beauty in my eyes that nature grants upon us. Though I understand that many care not for them they still hold a great power and should be respected all in their own right. I believe they have a rejouvinating power about them that just makes them that much more beautiful. Nice Job!
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it's good for an acrostic, i'm usually not a fan but yours was pretty solid, plus you do a great job of describing a thunderstorm and don't seem to struggle for your acrostic to work, you're probably looking one of these:
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I love this. Thunderstorms are something i love and write about.
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Excellent!!
This acrostic poem is awesome! I really enjoyed this poem. I’m amazed by thunderstorms. I like watching them when they happen. You described a thunderstorm quite well. This is a great poem. I love it.
- Andi
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