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I'm so sorry for you Mama

He never slaps me,
but his words strike me.
His cold fist
blackens Mama's eyes,
bloodies her lip.

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Written May 29th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • -Ink Artist-
    May 31, 2006
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    Fabulous short piece!! Very powerful for only 18 words!! Good luck in the contest!!

    ~*Lori*~

  • Naraku No Hana
    May 29, 2006
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    wow. Short and striking. This is a wonderful entry. So few words show so much. Good luck in the contest.