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Eternal Garden(Pixiku)

Better a weed in the garden of God
Than a rose
In the garden of man.

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Written May 29th, 2006

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  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    June 3, 2006
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    Lol, Thundercat, I imagine that weeds in God's garden look much like wildflowers in the rainy seasons


  • Thundercat
    June 3, 2006
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    Hmmm... I like this one. It is very thought provoking, yet oh so true. I am currently pondering the thought of what would a weed in God's garden look like? Hmmm... very interesting (attempts to assume intelligent pose, but ends up looking foolish). Well done on utilising this form to your best advantage. I will have to remember this one.

    Thundercat

  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    June 3, 2006
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    Lol, Lyseract-Matt, glad you liked it.


  • Leance
    May 30, 2006
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    The beauty that weed can be.........
    Very well captured......I indeed enjoyed........
    Best of luck in the contest.........
    Leance


  • SEA angel gold member
    May 29, 2006
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    Attention Getter

    Me too. I agree. What you have written is out of the ordinary so is an attention getter. Then, after pondering, makes even weeds seem to have some redeeming value. It just goes to say, as the proverbial they say, that as far as real estate what matters is: "location, location, location."


  • WolfHeart
    May 29, 2006
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    sweet

    I just love this Pixiku, and learning about the form, which is new to me. And I couldn't agree more! hugs - WolfHeart

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