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Mortal Touch

human hands
have built a home
for blooms
for feathered dreams

for spiders too

for every symbiotic smile
holds tears

myra
29.05.2006

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Written May 29th, 2006

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  • rite
    June 3, 2006
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    Human hands are always guided, some by the Light others by the dark. The power of the Light is so great that from what hands guided by the dark built it can make a home where Light lives. It takes time, requires patience and an undying believe that we are never abandoned by the Light, regardless of the darkness of some places and times we visit on our journey toward the Light. Ack.

    Chris


  • Redstormy gold member
    May 29, 2006
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    Oh this is lovely Myra.. haven't seen you around in awhile.
    Nice to see such a lovely succinct poem. Spring is inspiring
    isn't it.

    Red


  • Yazhi
    May 29, 2006
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    Thank you!


  • Yazhi
    May 29, 2006
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    A very wonderful entry! I wish you well in this contest with this inspirational write!
    Yazhi


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 29, 2006
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    This is so unique and truly inspirational. A beautiful write. Thanks for this entry... x LB

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