Infantile imbeciles incurred idiotic illnesses
Importantly incubation is indisputable
Intuitively interested interns implored
If isolation is ineffective
Isn't immediate infection inescapable
Interim intervention is indicated
Improper injections immediately induced
Incurable individual instability
Inevitably indicating immediate interment
Author notes
Written May 28th, 2006
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A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (I) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended January 3, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is crazy unique and I can really did that. I do not think I've ever seen so many "I" words together that make sense
I must give you an standing ovation for creativity and yes I did enjoy this fully. The only issue I have with it is that in a couple spots the flow doesn't go too well, especially the ending word. But overall it is note worthy and impressive.
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Thank you so much for your comments xXShakariXx. They are greatly appreciated.
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This piece is full of alliteration and it was quite brilliantly brought forth. Sometimes the wrong means taken to cure something so minor can make it incurable and major. I have diabetes which is the closest so far, to having its cure found. Some of the wrong medications were given in the past and that produced rapid amounts of deaths, but now, they have almost gotten it under control....as long as the patient is willing to medicate him/herself. Keep up the great work, good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing, and thanks for commenting!
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Thank you for your comments sophia heart. They are greatly appreciated.
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there are so many wonderful "I's" here and if one slows just down a bit, it all makes perfect sense. thank you so much for entering my contest, i really appreciate the effort. Truly infectious, sophia xxx
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