Chains Adoring
A promise made a promise kept
Our opened hearts must accept
The gift of each, to the other
As chains of love we discover
Neither lock nor key, but binding still
The strongest link, our own free will
Desire to stay comes from within
Then chains can fade as love begins
Sweet beginnings, a look a touch
A rose awakened longs for such
Once the blossom feels the need
The growing hunger she must feed
I would nurture this broken flower
Take away her need to cower
Lead this woman to ecstasy
To share her bed will set her free
Free to smolder and free to burn
Loose the firestorm, in to it turn
I’ll place her palm upon my chest
Then my own to hers is pressed
And kissing now with longing kiss
The urge it stems we can’t dismiss
I kiss again her waiting lips
Trembling fingers, to nipples slip
A welcome glow begins to build
We know our love will be fulfilled
Tongues in wanton wet pursuit
Chase to taste the luscious fruit
Lips now play on fevered skin
Down to breast then back again
Kissing, brushing blushing cheek
Then the treasure, do they seek
Natal node is left behind
Finely wakened fount I find
But my rush she playfully spurns
For it is now the ladies turn
Eye to eye she backs away
To the bed in slinking sway
A finger beckons me to join
I feel her power in my loin
Now the scholar takes the lead
The urge is great, I almost plead
As tinted nails rake my back
There is no doubt of their track
‘Round my poised and postured hip
Cross my thigh she let’s them slip
Till she grasps me in her hand
Stroking slowly, fires are fanned
Her thigh now slides across my waist
Pulls me closer, bodies laced
Guides me to her glistening gate
Neither now can stand to wait
I feel the folds, she guides me still
As she opens to me, comes the thrill
For a moment her breathing stops
Then crushing, kissing she rolls on top
Inch by inch she slowly settles
Eager now to test my metal
When the whole of me she finds
Uncontrolled she starts the grind
I reach to fondle proffered breasts
Knowing soon we’ll reach the crest
Her passion maddened by my touch
Her thighs now wrap me in their clutch
Swaying in union, waves take us on
Ebbing, slowing, then again strong
Arching her back and biting her lip
She rises up to the very tip
With all that’s in her one last time
She hurls down to heights sublime
Shaking, quaking with long exhale
Thundering hearts now tell the tale
Still at last, her cheek on my arm
Emotion fills me but not with alarm
Calm in knowing she’s mine to keep
With whispers I sooth her, until she sleeps
Author notes
This Erotic write was written in collaboration with my AP husband wtchr. It is written to the picture of the couple in chains.
Written May 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- Erotica by meena krish.
300 points, ended June 23, 2006, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so very hot and sensually beautiful to read for they are descriptive and exciting..well done! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
Take care~ -
Very sexy, hot and sensual and beautifully written. Nothing overly graphic about this piece leaving it to entice the reader all the more with such vivid images in the mind. Word choice is one that certainly stimulate the mind and body. Well Done!
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extremely sensual - i lvoe the way it builds up to a climax (no pun intended) throughout. sexual, without being smutty in the least.
lots of beautiful memories in this one
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This is GREAT!
Wow! This is good writing. The flow and rhyme were great but the story! Wow! Sensual and vivid imagery. Very, very well done. Good luck in the contest. Blessings! Tammy -
I believe under the right circumstance it would be exactly like that.
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This starts out as a beautiful love story and then turns into a wonderful piece of sensual luxery. If only it were that good in real life!!
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Well this certainly is a arousing piece. I liked the description and I felt it was done in good taste as well it it was entertaining to read. It sounds like you had fun.
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This is one of the best poems I've read from this category!Tasteful and original!Well done to both of you!
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Ha, look who is talking to me What a passion and what a choosen words and pictures! I am sorry to leave you waiting for my comment but it worth to read. Each line is simple and brilliant at the same time. Bravo!
~Sonja~ -
Fantastic
I love this poem. The length is perfect, and the flow is amazing. The language is slightly complexed and perfect. The structure is great and your intention seem quite clear. Well done.
Nunchaks -
very sexy and lots of passion, really hot, and written with such amazing class. i really enjoyed this wonderful write. the flow was truly great. and the story you painted here was truly beautiful. it show so much love within these two very loving people, what a excellent job you have done. yes it may be long but i enjoyed every word. thanks for sharing.
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The title intrigued me; the lengh (at first sight)frightened me; the smooth and easy flow pleasantly surprised me; I liked the rhyming and the beautiful imagery.
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Wow this is breath-takingly
beautiful and sensual.
Written so well. Vivid
images and emotions created
from your words. You two
did an amazing job.
Thank you for sharing.
I wish you good luck in
the contest.
Jeannie D Hunter
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THIS IS WHAT MAKING LOVE IS ALL ABOUT!
I thought that it was going to be TOO LONG (pun intended) at first glance BUT Iit turned out to be JUST RIGHT when I started seeing the erotic images of two people SO IN LOVE with making love layed out before me! It was very well done with fine rhymes and lines so sensual and sweet - to say the least! THANKS for spending your hard earned AP DOLLARS to feature and GOD LUCK in the contest to the both of you! It wouldn't surprize me in the least IF you took the 1, 000 points and The Shiny, Gold Trophy, too! I'm voting for you and sending you a STANDING O to seal the deal!
Peace & Love!
Earl. -
hehehehe!!!! Nothing but just a little bit of love..... I like the fact that its not greatly preverted and by your choice of wording you can really open up the imagaintion.
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Great arousing piece of work guys! A bit long for me personally but nevertheless a great piece of reading. You draw the reader in with your words and imagery and don't let go until you are finished. The caring and tenderness wrap themselves around the eroticism of this piece and leave the reader longing to touch and feel this coupling more. Fantastic job!
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