I build a place for you and me with water all around
And knowing that when I'm not here in-there I can be found
The water brakes upon the shore and tells us every day
This home is full of passioned love beneath the water-bay
With sun and moon and stars above will be our light in heart
So stay with me for ever on for we will never part
Its all I need this home for us to fill my heart with you
So if I'm not here, I'm waiting there for you
We walk the beach, lay down in the sand and watching over our home
You come with me to this house I made its cold the Lovingdrome .
I made it just for you and me for it's all we need in our heart
Every day you can find me there because I will never part.
Author notes
Poem 31.
Written for the one I once loved deeply and couldn't live without....
but life changes and so do our Lovingdromes....
Written May 28th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime Members Only by Partners In Crime.
725 points, ended November 13, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
For a special lover....
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
beautiful as always twinny
best of luck
Tasha
-
Lovers all untrue... until the right one comes along. I could feel your emotion in this beautiful poem. After reading the other comments I think this might be a bittersweet memory for you and I wish you the best with your new found love
Good luck in the contest
-
Nicely Done
This was very nicely written my friend. Very heartfelt. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Countrybabe
-
Hey, I commented on this before but now my comment isn't showing... oh well, here goes again.
First of all, this is a very beautiful poem. Your visuals are both clear and personally portrayed. You say in your author comment that it was written about someone you loved. You've written it so personally and it's hard to say if that 'someone' is still in your life or not.
Either way it's a superb poem, well written.
Good luck in the contest
Dee
-
-
Well...that someone is still in my heart and mind Dee....buth not in my Lovingdrome because she didn't wanted to stay there..
....
That place was found by someone else and she wanted to stay there with me so that's true love to me...
thnxs for your lovely comment
-
-
"With sun and moon and stars above will be our light in heart
So stay with me for ever on for we will never part"
Those lines are so beautiful, and when you repeated them, they came out so strong. I feel a warmth right now, and dream away to the place you've described. Just beautiful! -
I love this it's beautiful, the picture is wonerful, and your words well they are just perfect. Thankyou for filling my heart with dreams
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
