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Backstabbed and betrayed,
Over and over, here I lay,
Brutally beaten, inside and out,
But I refuse to lay here and pout,

Kill me, I don't care,
Damage me beyond repair,
Bust me to pieces,
Rip out my creases,
Stab me over and over,
think of ways to kill me slower,
Do what ever it may be,
Just don't say you fucking love me!

I don't ever want to hear that lie again,
I don't want anymore god damn ""FrIeNdS""
I will take all number of enemy's anywhere,
Just please no more ""Ill always care""

Kill me, I don't care,
Damage me beyond repair,
Bust me to pieces,
Rip out my creases,
Stab me over and over,
think of ways to kill me slower,
Do what ever it may be,
Just don't say you fucking love me!

Selfishness rules this world, love isn't real,
Best friends is only code for "out to kill"
No one really gives a god damn,
Especially those that call them selfs ""FRIENDS!""

Author notes

Kinda how I feel ... When you cnt truth your best friend how do u trust anyone the one u think will never hurt u ever.. will throw away in a second for a dick to fuck... stooop so low and hurt you or nothing... ?? I Dont get it! *TEARS*
Written May 28th, 2006

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  • Alvarez
    June 3, 2006
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    HEY, THIS IS NORMA WHAT HAPPEN, ARE U OK????????


  • Unique
    May 30, 2006
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    Dude....I mean...Wow...this was so frickin full of powerful emotions. It totally rocked and I liked it because it's so frickin true. I love how you put "best friends". Great Job on this write-- Ann

  • Alvarez
    May 28, 2006
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    SINCERE

    I LIKE THIS POEM AND U RIGHT SOME FRIENDS. ARE MORE ENEMIES THAT FRIENDS. I'M SORRY I HOPE U ARE OK..... NORMA>>>>>>>


  • Sara Bellem
    May 28, 2006
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    Hmmm.... reminds me of a lying bitch I know, when all she was just a "virus" ... thank god she doesn't make me sick anymore...

    ANYWAYS, I know who this is about, and that bitch isn't worth it. She isn't even worth your time. The person I thought was my best friend turned out to be a fucking joke, but not us, no, no matter the shit, we always seem to get through it together

    Remember the fighter that lives in you.

    You are the most beautiful mom I have ever known,
    And one of the strongest ppl in my life.

    Don't ever forget that

    P.S You, Bobby, & Jaydie wanna go to the Lake THURSDAY? I'm off and that day can be entirely yours

    Let me know

    Sara


  • EidolonDesires
    May 28, 2006
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    This is a really good poem babe. I asked myself the same question when Jeremy ripped out my heart. The truth of it is, that deep down, you dont really trust anyone, I mean you let them in so far, but you never again have that bond...unless you want to take the risk of being broken. Being broken is a part of life it makes you apperciate the good times, but that doesn't mean it hurts any less. I wish there was a way for me to make you see that I am going to be there, and not leave you like all the rest. I guess I will just have to prove myself to you. I love you, even if you don't truly believe it in your heart yet.
    love always,
    ~Chris~

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