I feel myself sinking deeper
In this quicksand beneath my feet
It’s past and present and future
I’m falling towards my defeat
Emotions grab hold of my ankles
And threaten my body to drown
I’m writhing in mounting terror
On my whole way down
The anger is pulling so strong
The confusion is helping as well
But strongest of all is sadness
And they’re taking me to their hell
I can’t lift a single finger
I can’t change a thought in my mind
I’m fearing the depths below me
And everything I’ll find
And at last I cease my struggling
There’s no point in playing life’s games
I succumb to all these terrors
And perish in these flames
Author notes
self explanatory i think
Written May 27th, 2006
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its good and tragically sad...nice write!!
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still in love with you and your talent!
hello again gal. i know it has been a while since i have been on this site,.. but this wonderful poem was just the thing i needed to hear,.. not only is it an another amazing piece of your talent but also it is a heart felt composition. i absolutely love it! i hope all is well with you. i miss you and as always love your work! luv ya sista. -
HONEST AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
As we fear we give in to those fears, a most wonderful and honest poem my dear friend. I hope to see more from you soon.
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