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Fire

 

A lady with red hair
has fire in her heart
It shows in her passion
You'll be careful if your smart

 

But I wouldn't put that fire out
even if I could
Cause I like living dangerous
and a little fires good

 

But she can be melted
with just the right Touch
I offer my hand
even though it's not much

 

If she'll share me her passion
I'll give her my heart
I'll share my life
as we make a new start 

Author notes

Anastasia a red headed beauty,  We all have our weakness I have one.**********Women*******************
Written May 27th, 2006

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 22, 2006
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    What a coincidence!

    CHARLIE - WOW!! I am really amazed to read this, it's SO GOOD! And it helps that I'm a redhead, what a strange coincidence, to read about another red-haired lady - I can imagine I'm the subject here!!! Just kidding... I'm tickled - in fact, I'm sitting here with a big smile on my face right now. Thank you for sharing this one!!!!


  • earthstar
    June 8, 2006
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    very excellent

    very good i do not want to talk about blood i just had er done on my left hand. the care and passion express i wish sometimes it was true in life


  • June 5, 2006
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    AWE FIRE/RED EXPRESSION OF GREAT PASSION
    ENJOYED YOUR HOT POEM..
    NEW HERE JUST BOUNCING AROUND,
    HAVE 2 POEMS POSTED IF INTERESTED
    I WRITE OF MANY SUBJECTS
    RESPECTS,
    SHATTERED SILENCE


  • gullionmar
    June 5, 2006
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    american thia is lovely keep on writing you are very good god bless

  • Forgottenangel08
    June 2, 2006
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    very beautiful. i loved it.
    love always and forever
    sharon

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 28, 2006
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    A most beautiful write American, filled with such longing and love through your words Love always Josephine

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