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Little Kenny

 

Little Kenny had six pence
But what he wanted was a pound
so he hired a jester
to change his pence around

 

It seemed fine till one day in time
the castle he build fell down
then all of the peasants
Said Little Kenny you hound

 

It wasn't me Kenny said
But everyone knew
And all little kenny
could say, was boo hoo

Author notes

Ok, Pushing it a little, But its cute for the kids,  Can the Adult figure out who kenny is,  Cupcrazy I hope you don't mind the political satire.
Written May 27th, 2006

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  • June-bug
    July 26, 2006
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    excellent

    Wonderful Job! You have shown your talent again in this piece, when I first read it I wouldn't have put a political effect on it as it is a very cute childrens verse, I can think of a few who can fit the role of Kenny but not sure it my answer would be right, but I believe the latest would be Sadaam.


  • gullionmar
    July 10, 2006
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    nicely done


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    You recieved 28 kisses from the children! Bunny

  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 8, 2006
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    cute political satire, something an adult could chuckle about as they read it to there kids, very inovative! Loved it! Good luck at judging! Bunny


  • gullionmar
    June 5, 2006
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    very cute write nicely done


  • wordplayer
    June 3, 2006
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    Very good poem Point well taken keep up the good work

  • ea silver member
    May 27, 2006
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    It probably lends itself to many. Thanks again for your second entry and stay tuned to hear what the Mother Goose Hour has to say after next weekend...


  • Sandygram
    May 27, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    I love this one. I must assume it is about Ken Lay and his Enron debacle. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy

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