i am lost and i don't under stand why my life is always getting messed up. i actually find someone that i truly love and now i loose him.... i can't stand being lost.... i love him and i am lost because i am about to loose the love of my life. i am lost and i can't deal with this pain.... i love him so much and i don't want to loose him. i have no say in what he does but i love him and i am loosing my mind because i have lost him...........
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Written May 27th, 2006
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Brittany, It sounds like he is losing you if he can't see how much you love him. If that is the case then don't let him hurt you any longer. This is a very deep write filled with your emotions. I wish you the best and love is out there for everyone. If it's not him, the right man is there. My thoughts and prayers are with you. Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen with all of us. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Your poem is very revealing.You have expressed your thoughts and feelings well.
Well done dear poet.
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keep it up
i love the poem it is indeed very heart-felt but i love the poem -
This is very heart-felt and relatable. I like it very much.
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