The queen

The queen The Queen THe Queen
wanted to become the king
so she became a jester
in the court

She grew strong
each time she spoke
Made friends with simple folk
she was loved by all

if the queen the queen the Queen
became the king the king the king
Does that mean the king
would now be the queen

Author notes

THis is in the true spirit of a mother goose nursery ryhme, A political commentary for adults enjoyable by the kids
Written May 27th, 2006

Mother Goose Story Hour by Cupcrazy. 300 points, ended June 12, 2006, 23 entries
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June-bug
July 26, 2006
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excellent
excellent write, you have an amazing talent, you should write more like this cause the are very entertaining as they get the mind going.
Cupcrazy
June 12, 2006
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You recieved 32 kisses from the children! Bunny
Cupcrazy
June 8, 2006
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Great piece, loved the messages behind this piece. Great work, good luck at judging! Bunny
TallDrinkofWater
June 5, 2006
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YEs Hillary it is, There is a book called the Stories behind the stories of Motor Goose(don't know the Author), You can find it in most libaries, It's a fun read, I Did a paper on it years ago in College got an A and it was published and even won an award.
blackday
May 27, 2006
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Ahaha. That was great. I could see the Hilary thing but I was actually thinking sex change. bahahaha. XD

-Chase
Sandygram
May 27, 2006
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WONDERFUL POEM
This came out great Charlie. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the mother goose contest. See I knew you could do a childrens poem. Great write. Take care over there. Sandy
TallDrinkofWater
May 27, 2006
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YES, IT is about Hilary. But don't tell Anyone LOL,
ea
May 27, 2006
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Yes, I'm sure they will enjoy this on some level. I am always curious about the underlying messages of the old rhymes and like to know the backgrounds. Is this about Hillary? Thanks for this entry