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Two Worlds Collide

A world composed of love and evil
Full of hellish ways and no more angel to find in retrieval
The world combined together
Where demons have now rose and angel have fell
A heavenly world yet taken over by the powers of hell

Demons fluttering and spreading the passion of the devils name
Returning the angels to God to play a part on the devils evil game
One side bad and one side good
Showing that this is a life on earth spreads from hood to hood

Evil equals to hate, death, darkness and aggression
Good equals to happiness, life, and a love obsession
A demon or angel, which do you want to abide
Because a result of these two worlds have collide

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Written May 26th, 2006

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  • Dolphin Shaktiheart
    October 18, 2006
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    Good description of the dichotomy that is fueling the war between good and evil, light and darkness, truth and illusion
    I wonder which side will win in the end?

    smoosh.


  • Iohagh
    July 18, 2006
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    Darling

    Into every life falls
    both joys and pall
    no one escapes pain
    or feeling sometimes insane.

    Smoosh

    Janet

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    May 28, 2006
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    thank you for the comment


  • Shakes-spear
    May 28, 2006
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    The message is clear, but will they listen. Good and evil will always collide. Good job, The Shaker

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    May 27, 2006
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    Thank You!! I enjoyed being apart of your contest!


  • Mike Blade-Xiang
    May 27, 2006
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    Good Job

    Execllent. Thanks for entering.

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