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SUZUKI (Acrostic)



S oul cruising down the road
U nder the blazing sun,
Z ipping by traffic, having some
U ninhibited fun;
K eeping it real, making life sweet,
I nsects in the teeth- a special treat!





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Well, okay, it's not EXACTLY an onomatopoeia, but it could be!
Written May 26th, 2006

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  • heismysong
    May 30, 2006
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    If you sound out the syllables seperately, while dropping the pitch of your voice for each one, it sounds like you're shifting gears on your motorcycle.


  • Mamabekaboo
    May 29, 2006
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    Well, if you listen to how this type of motorcycle sounds just like its name. At least I think so... I have also heard a comedian make fun of it. I guess you would probably have to hear that as well to really think it is funny. Thanks for commenting on the page and entering my contest.
    Because He Lives,
    Beka

  • Child of the Father
    May 29, 2006
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    I am confused, probably cause I am knew to this but how is Suzuki at onomatapia? It is the name of the motorcyle, it is not a word that makes a sound? Danni


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    May 28, 2006
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    Well Done !

    heismysong, Congrats on the trophy, we're glad you could come and pick up the trophy. We'd like to take a picture, just smile! Oh my! Good Job!
    Dennis


  • ma belle
    May 28, 2006
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    clapping

    Enjoyed your little acrostic--the ending--a special treat for sure!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 27, 2006
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    LOL. Excellent Excellent Excellent. Best of luck in this contest. ~Pam


  • Mamabekaboo
    May 26, 2006
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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA... ~YUMMMMMMY~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is great. Very Original as well. Thanks for the entry into my contest.
    Because He Lives,
    Beka


  • heismysong
    May 26, 2006
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    Haha- thanks! I remember hearing a comedy routine on this- thought it might make for a good entry.


  • Pisces Pieces
    May 26, 2006
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    I think it's great...I've heard that motorcycles tend to sound like the names of their manufacturers, so it sure can be an onomatopoeia I would think

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