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The Way Things Are

Please don't cry,
Everything will be alright.
I miss your sparklin eye,
Even tho, I hold you tight.
Can you feel the love we share?
Could you maybe give it a chance?
Your heart will be repaired.
Take a simple step back, for 1 short glance.
You drew a heart in my mind,
Then again on the outside.
All you have to do is find,
Find the real you, the one from inside.
Let your ship set a sail,
Don't be ashamed...or even scared.
Of course, don't be afraid to fail.
I'll try to play it fair.
If everything becomes a blur,
Just remember this 1 simple task.
As long as you can imagine,
All you have to do is ask....

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hm..not sure I like this one but hey...its a poem.
Written March 12th, 2003

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  • April 4, 2003
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    Don\'t touch it! It\'s Great!

    Your Poem is much better then mine, yours brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sending me here...I would have never read this if you hadn't...i'd be missing out

  • prairiegal gold member
    March 12, 2003
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    good strong visual write with hope nice conte

    Enjoyed the hope in this pc. @ relationshps. Flowed well, nice and smooth, good content matter, great visual images. Nice bright print with the little pixies, a little mischief? Really worth others reading. You should like it, you did a great job. keep on. thanks 4 sharing God Bless