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Bailey's Birthday

Another year since you've been born
You've been broken and you've been torn
These 14 years you've made it through
So here's a poem from me to you
I know it's cheesy, you'll probably laugh
About my bad rhyming I know you will chaff
Yeah you get pissed, you yell and you scream
But you're really not as scary as sometimes you seem
You stick up for what you believe in best
I hope you pass the science test!
You love the cows, the pigs and the chickens
At lunch the fries are always slim pickens'
You love lacrosse, the bruises too
Panic! At The Disco fan through and through
You hate the posers, no doubt about that
And sometimes you think 'geeze, Roni's a brat!'
That's alright and that's okay
Cause now I have just one thing to say
You better have fun tonight or I'll kick yo bootie
So have a good birthday and try not to be snooty!

Author notes

I wrote this poem for my friend's birthday. I know you'll never read this, but I love ya Bailey!
Written May 26th, 2006

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  • Kristen Corpse
    February 5, 2007

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    xD! Really cute rhyming Veronica. I liked the line about the science test. None of my friends from school write nor do they know I write. It's kind of a secret that I never told anyone. Lol. Well, until last year when they read my stuff and were like "OMFG!" Nice work here though, dear. Keep it up.

    Love always,
    Kristen ♥


  • macandrew
    July 6, 2006
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    Well done. Just the right mix of rhymes for a fun poem.

    thanks for your comment.
    John


  • RestfulBuddy
    July 6, 2006
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    Yeah, I put it in her card for her birthday, she liked it. x) She loved how it's all serious for like the first 3-4 lines then got just silly and stupid. It was fun to write for her.

  • hidden soul
    July 6, 2006
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    cool

    cute... really cute. you're good


  • AM Cochran
    July 5, 2006
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    aw. I do hope baily got to read it, and I hope she giggled somewhat. I loved the poem, and it did make me laugh. I wish her a happy belated birthday, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
    keep writing.
    they'll keep reading.
    ~Ash~

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