Here it comes again
The urge to feel again
I hear it creeping in
Your voice melts my thoughts
Your music's in my heart
I lose all reason when you're near
How can I escape
I'm addicted to this song
I need to hear it
I need to feel it
Singing in my soul
I hear you in my dreams
This angel's song you sing
Nighttime music
Intoxicating and intimidating
Even though you don't show your face
I know you still the same
Your voice is my companion
My strength
My weakness
Author notes
This poem is was inspired by Andrew Lloyd Weber's musical version of Phantom of the Opera.
Written May 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- Wicked Games and Lithium Dreams [18+] by Immortal Obscurity.
900 points, ended October 19, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I thought so, before even reading your authors' notes! I LOVE Phantom, and I think you did Christine's emotions justice in this. An absolutely beautiful, sublime piece of art!
*hands you a red rose with a black ribbon tied around it*
"You did very well, my dear. He is pleased with you."
Good luck in my contest!
L.
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beautifully written the music and flow are stunning
beautiful i was wondering for the longest time when some one was going to make a phantom of the opera poem.Then i read your work and it flowed so beautifully and showed the cravings christine has for Erik's voice that i had no choice but to add it to my favs.Best of luck looking forward to more phantom of the opera poetry.
Yours truly,
~lovelikeblood
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Fantastic
Fantastically well written..personally i believe it would sound great with a symphonic metal band singing it..anyways
i love the way this poem is built up, i admire your style
really amazing
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