We take a walk alone a path
full of flowers and sweet scent
We hold hands and touch palms
I pull you aw so close
we slowly start to kiss
As I look into those eyes
I'm lost I take a sigh
you beauty takes my breath away
You say I'm kinda quite
I just smile and think
My god she leaves me Speechless
Author notes
For Joshie. I know it's short but I said what I wanted to say.
Written May 26th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Speechless Contest by Poetryintheblood.
300 points, ended May 29, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you American for your most beautiful entry into my contest, short but sweet is sometimes the simplest way to get words across, good luck in my contest
Josephine
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WONDERFUL POEM
Oh this was a beautiful and heartfelt poem. I am sure Josie loves it. Maybe love will bloom for you two. Take care, Sandy
Best of luck in the contest.
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Ohhhh i love this one, so romantic, there are times, you dont need many words, this says it all. Excellent write. sj
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This is so cute and very romantic. A beautiful way to put into words what you feel.
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Very Very good!
This is a wonderful piece of poetry that was well crafted and well penned. Your words have depth and great impact!
-Keep the ink flowing
-Dave
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