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A Galaxy of Passion

Cradled within the silken sands
Two bodies come to rest
Held captive in alluring warmth
Chest pressed to heaving breast

Tender lips caress velvet skin
In twain's valley, kisses whispered
A cry escapes, of heated pleasure
Upon the cosmos can be heard

A million flickering lights pulsing
Stars dance with a twinkling glitz
As fingers waltz with finesse
O'er delicate hips

And enter slow, his manly wand
Held tight in blushing folds
Dancing their rhythm of desire
Passion's release gently cajoled

Upon the interstate of the Milky Way
They ride deep into the night
Enraptured in the brilliance
Of the moon's gentle light

Seeping waves of euphoria
Crash the orgasmic brink
And with a trail of blazing stars
Release their pearly ink

Clouds of love and passion
Float softly to their heart
With tender kiss, close their eyes
To once again, join the dark

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Written May 26th, 2006

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  • Night Valkyrie
    May 26, 2006
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    OMG, this is like wow. And is this, uh, that inspired piece I was hearing about? Heh, you know I had to pick on you. Beautiful poem.

    ~Val

  • dutch2lips
    May 26, 2006
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    oh yes, very good reason, seeing our love for eachother, my heartkeeper and mine in your words

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 26, 2006
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    Thank you hun. I too had tears, I hope yours were for a good reason, as mine were. Glad you enjoyed.

    Storm

  • dutch2lips
    May 26, 2006
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    oh storm, for some reason this poem brought tears in my eyes. Such a delicate and deep sensual love.
    A great write!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 26, 2006
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    Hun, as often as I see you bookmark things... you are going to need bookmarks for your bookmarks. Thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed.

    Storm

  • KnightRhymer
    May 26, 2006
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    This is beautiful, Storm. I love it. Love amongst the stars. This is great! Gotta bookmark. lol Excellent work. Very tender and emotional.
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