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catch up

Not all those who wander are lost
They are just waiting for something bigger and better to walk towards
Or maybe, just maybe they are waiting for you to catch up
To walk beside them and follow where they lead,
You shouldn’t judge the person that wanders
Because it may just be you who is lost
Not the person that is wandering,
Maybe they are just waiting for the rest of the world to catch up

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not all those who wander are lost - i tired, if its wrong let me know and ill fix it
Written May 25th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Intangible Sanity
    May 26, 2006
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    thanks so much, i like ur idea for a contest
    thanks again
    sarah


  • Faded silver member
    May 26, 2006
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    I like this. You've taken a segment and given it a whole new perspective, one I'd certainly not have thought of myself. This is neatly constructed and well expressed. It seems to me that it belongs on a magnet stuck to somebody's friedge.... a little gem of inspiration you could pick up for a couple of pounds and remember for a lifetime.
    If I had one suggestion it would be to work on the actual form of this... to break up the lines and insert commas and stops etc into certain places to make the read a little easier.
    On the whole, I did enjoy this. It was refreshing.
    ~Faded