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Freedom

feet pounding on the ground
as the grass slaps my thighs
chasing after that feeling
the feeling of free
my toes scuff the bottom of the creek
and then find the rock
i stand on it and feel
the water swirl around my knees
i jump and spin when i run to reach the top
and suddenly i drop
high of the feeling
feeling of free

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Written May 25th, 2006

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