hate blinds
burning white hot
like looking directly into the sun
why cant you ever
see what you've done to me
Im in a box
i cant undo all your locks
i cant ever find the key
to live life like it was even semi-mine
you confine me
patronize me
i cant ever be good enough for you
one misdoing
you over amplify
i just wanna not try
i cant even resist
or im condemned
why cant you let me choose
because a second seat
is what i take
to the church
you forsake
with you hypocrisy
why cant you see im dying
to be me
free soem choices
listening to mine
not other voices
you keep me on a leash
im ready to break free
so much so that
ill chew through it
do anything to break free
cut the chain that stops the
circulation to my life
doesnt matter what i have
to get through
i just want to get away from you.
Author notes
Written May 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- Make me cry, laugh, and wish for more by dreamfinder.
520 points, ended October 19, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rounds #1 by takemypainaway.
300 points, ended November 14, 2007, 9 entries
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I like thie the lines are written differand but i like it thanks for entering
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Very good, I could tell those feelings were strong. Good luck in everything.
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Hey babe, i remeber this. and you are still too good and i dont think they realize all the shit they put uyou through. i love you.
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This was a good write. i could really feel your anger all the way through. Very good.
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