This is an insight to the real me…
Sex is misunderstood
People believe that it is for entertainment, for popularity
They “do it” to have a laugh,
To make them look “cool”
They don’t know the reason at all
I look into your eyes and see
A perfect love, a perfect me
Nothing’s gonna change, I don’t want sex
This is all for you, all for respect
An odd couple hand in hand
They see each other as real people
Unlike some they’re not interested in what’s under the clothes
They’re looking far deeper, under the skin
They don’t have to hide; they’ve let the love in
I look into your eyes and see
A perfect love, a perfect me
Nothing’s gonna change, I don’t want sex
This is all for you, all for respect
A flirting couple on the corner
Short skirt, low top, high heels
All they think about is feeling good
They only want the body, no matter who they are
They just want to sling it in the back of a car
I look into your eyes and see
A perfect love, a perfect me
Nothing’s gonna change, I don’t want sex
This is all for you, all for respect
It’s not something to take lightly
Your dignity can be ripped away
If you play around, play the field
It’s you in the end whose gonna lose out
And no one’s gonna be around to listen to you shout
I look into your eyes and see
A perfect love, a perfect me
Nothing’s gonna change, I don’t want sex
This is all for you, all for respect
Nothing’s gonna change, I don’t need sex
I’m waiting for you, I’m waiting for respect
Author notes
Well I sort of thought that not many people actually write about this topic and if it is talked about, isn't always talked about in the right way.. basically sex isn't to do with just doing it with anyone, i think you have to be in love and if you aren't, you should wait.. just my view 
just to clarify... when i say "this is all for you, all for respect" it's basically saying that i'm not going to do anything, but i'm doing it for them.. to keep the respect between us in society.. sorry if confusing 
Written May 25th, 2006
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i too share your views, there is always so much under a persons skin, in their hearts and souls
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wow! han this is a really deep write! this is amazing, and comes with a very importent message, which needs to be told!
and you have done just that! way to go! a brilliant write as always.
take care in the future, and keep writing
kerri
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Very well done. Nice flow and wonderful meaning behind it. When people are young they think sex makes them cool, when they get older they have it for many of the wrong reasons, hope, loneliness, etc. Great job explain why not to, it is only real and true, when you feel something deep and special with that person. And I don't mean lust.lol
GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. -
Hi thank goodnes for the author notes I was getting worried,lol, yes there has to be very big feelings between two people, and respect is so important, be happy, a good write, hugs Di
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Truthful as truths can be
that is really awesome. It is really moving too...i have made mistakes that involve that...i have pretendended to be easy just to get guys to look at me..at least the popular ones...it didn't work out. I had a lot of things went wrong! I made one final mistake with it..and it made my whole family look down at me. I heard my mother telling my father that my grandfather knew i was bettter than this and he saw me to be the successful one..and i had failed him. A lot of things go wrong when you do not have respect for yourself...take it from me..anyone..that it gets really hard when you make big mistakes that deal with guys...i never once blamed anyone else but myself. i should have known better, but the only thing on my mind then was having guys as accessories around my neck..now i know that i dont even need one..i can be successful myself..i love this poem..it speaks the truth.. the only one present in this area of a subject. Great job! -
thanks so much i really appreciate all the comments i get!
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WOW! I agree with consuling tears, it did KICK ASS! Good luck in the contest, I'm totally sure you'll place! Respect is v. important. Whoever doesn't respect you, poke 'em to the ends of the universe!
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that kicked butt, I loved this. You did such a great job, I loved the words, the beat it sent off. It was great good job. ~Holly
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yeah I do think it is... I'm just saying that i think it should be only when you're in love or it really spoils it, i think.. hmm well anyway tis only my view so yeah
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very strong point. but i dunno if i agree cus it's instinct to want sex. still good.
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I really like this. and you hit my view of sex on the head also. awsome write very honest. the repitition of I look into your eyes and see
A perfect love, a perfect me
Nothing’s gonna change, I don’t want sex
This is all for you, all for respect
is perfect. thanks so much for you views and for entering. good luck. -
*claps* Beautiful. Couldn't have put if better myself. I really like it, and you should definately win. Wonderful message, if only people would listen. Keep writing hun, you are really talented x
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