Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Heaven And Hell

There is no heaven without hell, no happiness without pain
And surely you must not be dying, for I know your kindness is not insane
And even though I am far away, you know I see more in you
than just the darkness and bitter cold that seems to shine through
I see a flicker shuddering in this cold and desolate land,
and I plan to help it ignite with the help of a lending hand
Please do not let apathy grip you in its cold, steel teeth
There are no words I can say to a bloodless, pallidity of a sheet

Author notes


Written May 25th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem, please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Yunaleska gold member
    May 26, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful beautiful work Rose I love the style and flow of this. Hm...you're getting me the urge to write write write but...I can't think of much to write. We'll see.