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Delusions Of Reality

Delusions of reality, and the hauntings of the mind
They are always the worst, always one of a kind
Remember they are only your fears and regret remade,
and you can defeat them with time and hope relaid

Be kind to yourself, see you for what you are
You are more than a shadow within the halls; you are a star
A star that has been blanketed by an overwhelming darkness
But if you look beyond the cover, you'll be greeted by light's kiss

Remember who you are, and not what you think you've become
There is so much more ahead of you, you've only just begun

Author notes

This could go out to anyone who feels they are worthless, but it was written to a certain someone.
Written May 25th, 2006

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  • Yunaleska gold member
    May 26, 2006
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    Aww! So pretty and sweet. Wonderful write. It flows beautifully

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 25, 2006
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  • outlawtorn
    May 25, 2006
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    so many comments i feel i need to make
    my vocabulary spins drunkenly in your wake
    but my balance i will regain
    and i fear not even in my refrain
    to tell you over and over again
    that your words are kin to necessity

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 25, 2006
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    I'm glad you could relate.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    May 25, 2006
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    Thank you. I'm glad you think so.
  • Silently Broken
    May 25, 2006
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    this really gives back hope. U were able to explaine what I somtimes feel so clearly, i think loads of ppl will be able to realate to this beautiful poem.

  • live-death
    May 25, 2006
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    i liked this a lot, it has a lot of different meanings, i loved the first part it is soo true, and then u give courage to everyone..
    well done
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