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Missin' You

I used to see you everyday of my life.
Now i will be lucky if i see you once a month.

You are moving on in your life faster than me
and i hope i will still be in yours wherever you are.

I've known you for over a year and i have realized onr thing about you.
After everything we have been through you are the one i still love.

I miss you baby and when i see you i will have open arms.
I will always be there for you no matter what because i love you... since day one.
I cant wait to see you!

I love you BABY!!!

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I love you for you and wont stop now.
Written May 25th, 2006

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  • southern kisses
    May 25, 2006
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    Thank you for your very nice comment! My boyfriend is leaving for the army and is doing all kinds of paper work and i dont see him as much as we want to, but i support him and love him dearly. so thanks for your comment.message me anytime!!
    ~Southern kisses~


  • Anshu
    May 25, 2006
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    awesome work...........it tells you the extent and the ecstasy when onme waits for someone dear.........
    you have really done a great job........and the lines i loved the most are

    You are moving on in your life faster than me
    and i hope i will still be in yours wherever you are.

    its true that every1 wants to suxed in life annd sometimes we forget the people who mean the most to our lives.......but at the end we need to come back to them coz they are the ultimate destination............
    I likd your work very much and i hope that you will keep up the good work
    hoping to hear more from you
    till we meet again keep dancing to the tunes of life
    Love
    Anshu



  • May 25, 2006
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    beautiful my dearest. I hope you see him soon.
    ~Brandi~