Although that rocky mountain stands glaring in your way,
it can't take what's yours from you, however long its stay
Please don't let this heap of rock take away your life
There would be nothing of you left within all of your strife
What if we were to lose you so far down that road?
We wouldn't know what's happened to you, how would we be told?
You cannot give up just because you feel it is too hard
Don't tell me you're giving in because he holds another card
Sometimes we have to do things that's best for us no matter the pain
And in the end, it'll be all worth it; the blood, and each tear stain
Please know my heart is with you, even though you feel alone
And when you feel hopeless in the dark, and torment to your bone
I would never forget such a loyal, sweet, and loving friend
You will be on my mind always, right up until the end
You will never completely lose me if you wish for me to stay
It doesn't matter the distance, or how long you'll be away
Remember the most important thing to friendship is the love
Darling, you have all the love within me to give, carry it above
I once waited a month and a half for one so dear to my heart,
and I would wait that long and longer, though it might tear me apart
You mustn't give up the fight now, even though it seems rough
Remember, you have strength within you, and you can handle tough
And it's not just your own strength that you carry within your soul
because I'd be more than willing to lend you a hand to keep you whole
You must fight for what's best for you, no matter how it hurts
If you don't get back your life, your destruction will come first
And you know I couldn't live with that, you know how much you mean to me
So please don't lie down and let him control you, be the best you can be
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Don't let him do it, Yuna, sweetie. If I can be free, so can you. Think of Raging Winds. Think of what I said about what she did to me.
I know you can do it. I know you can. Just be strong.
Written May 25th, 2006
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If I were to change any part of this piece, it would lose it's meaning. I rarely ever change something once it is written. For how quickly I had written it, I don't think the rhyming is actually half bad.
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Very deep.
Thank you for sharing, and well wishes for the one you wrote it for.
Rous
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I love you!
I'll try to get through this. *sigh* I guess I'm...so scared...
Beautiful beautiful poem, Rose.
I love it. thanks.




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