Stars sparkling midnight velvet,
navy blue hue around the moon.
Sitting watching silence speaking,
falling stars begin to bloom.
I made a very secret wish,
wanting it to be fulfilled.
Sitting down in my gazebo,
the wind became cool still.
You once cut me roses red,
saying Darling this is for you.
Accepting love without those words,
it turned my loving heart blue.
Yet I picked up the pieces,
waiting for your love to grow.
Each time you embraced me,
I could never let you know.
I loved you with all my heart,
but I could not tell you so.
Waiting to hear, I love you,
No magic, so you must let me go!
Author notes
About saying good bye to someone you love.
Written May 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- The Big 'L' by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended October 22, 2006, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thats brilliant darling...
closet
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Beautiful poem
Hi Ennvoy
What a wonderful poem you have penned here and I love the imagery of your words, that have beautifully painted this page for me to enjoy!! Wonderful write and thank you for entering my contest and being part of my group!! Your a wonderful poet and I am glad to have you aboard! Good luck to you!!
Jasminerose
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Well done.
Beautifully written story of love gone away. You have written this with joy and sadness in the wording. Your words are also colorful as this story goes on.
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