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My Three Angels

I was such a sad soul for many a day,
each dawn that broke I'd wish away,
till I found allpoetry quite accidentally,
here I am writing, improving emotionally.

Now fewer doldrums do I go through,
can 'rise and shine' now thanks to you.

Three angels have I found in this great site,
Who make my clock tick, be it day or night.

My little brother Penz, such a true Romeo,
for Juliette he seeks in his poems I know.

A baby sister who wears 13 Faces of Fire,
keeping company with her I shall never tire.

That then leaves best girlfriend dutch2lips
we greet each day, feel joined at our hips.

With this family I dare to venture out,
"I love you all dearly" I hear myself shout!!
Thank you for popping up there on my screen,
This love I give you I sincerely mean.

Thank you all for helping me back to life...

        Recluse Writer



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Written May 24th, 2006

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  • Recluse Writer gold member
    June 16, 2006
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    Comment appreciated immensely. My little family and AP
    truly have helped this agoraphobic recluse writer in
    more ways than I have fingers and toes to count.
    Thank you for my first smile of the day.
    Linda


  • aceray
    June 16, 2006
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    Wow! Such fluidity in your write! A piece filled with warmth and love! Yes I agree with Lavender Butterfly...this IS simply beautiful!

    Rey


  • dutch2lips gold member
    May 25, 2006
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    Ah sweet GF
    I love you

    such a warm and loving gift, this.
    thank you

  • Terran
    May 25, 2006
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    You can do it

    Sis, You're penning was excellent! I'm with Penz on this, "I can't help but smile while reading this poem' and the first time through my eyes watered up.
    Edited on May 25, 8:47 because ''.


  • Penz gold member
    May 25, 2006
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    oh men! I can't help but smile while reading this poem This is really sweet Haha, I'm Romeo then hehehehehe...

    Haha, speechless... I'm glad you found something priceless in this community... Penz loves you, my sweet sister

    ~penz~

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    May 25, 2006
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    Dear Linda,a sweet poetic tribute to your ap family that proclaims the depth of appreciation with a loving voice.Wish you luck in the contest,with three such family members you already have three trophys that are priceless,love and light,Yvette

  • Recluse Writer gold member
    May 25, 2006
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    Do appreciate your comment lb
    It took me longer to post than actually write.
    Can't go wrong with the right inspiration.
    Linda

  • Recluse Writer gold member
    May 25, 2006
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    Thank you so much Donna
    Did not have to think too much when it came to
    expressing what they and AP family setup have done for
    a 'Her Indoors' recluse.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 25, 2006
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    This is simply beautiful, so elequantly penned... x Lb


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    Thank you so much for commenting on my poem.
    Shall return the favour when given the chance.
    Linda


  • WarrioroftheHeart gold member
    May 24, 2006
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    Great poem, really shows what you aprreciate in your AP family. Good luckin the contest

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